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Blue Moon Coaching - Jimmy Y's avatar

Great 2nd chapter!

I like how the end takes a turn there, the stranger who saves him was only after the goblins because they ate his chickens. Really unexpected!

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I love the buildup so far and my imagination is helping me paint the picture. I also noticed that Aelfric’s name was repeated a lot in this chapter, don’t know if you did that intentionally to point him out instead of using He.

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